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Soldier's march

Discussion in 'Composing' started by Anonymous, Jan 12, 2007.

  1. Anonymous

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    I'm 17, I'm composing for fun, I fell in love with music 2 years ago.
    That's a piece I want to show you. I composed it using only computer program (usually I compose using the piano, a pen or a pencil, a rubber and a notebook).
    The program is playing this... I'm using Finale Notepad demo and I couldn't creat midi file, so I recorded it with my microphone.
    I would be grateful if you comment on it.
    P.S.: That's march of a small toy-soldier :D
     
  2. juufa72

    juufa72 New Member Piano Society Artist

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    Czesc, bardzo ladny. Lubię kompozycję, ale wy możecie wyrabiać kompozycję dłuższy.

    Translation (my very bad Polish):

    Hello, very nice. I like the composition, but you could make the composition longer.
     
  3. techneut

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    Cute ! Nice catchy theme.
    Not sure if it should be much longer - toy soldier's marches are usually short.
    A bit more staccato would help to better create the image of this little fella prancing about.
     
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    Hey, juufa, very nice Polish :D
    Well, this composition is really short, but I like that :)
    edzio: moze udaloby mi sie jakos podrzucic ci pelna wersje finala? [2004]
     
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    Good lord... seems like the Polish mafia has invaded our site :roll: :lol:
     
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    And the Dutch Tulip & Perennial Growers as laborers! :wink:
     
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    Small is beautiful. I would leave it the way it is:) But that is my opinion, do as you wish.
     
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    A cute, simple piece. Good for younger siblings or friends I suppose.
     

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