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My very first posting - Chopin - Waltz No.20 in F minor

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  1. Anonymous

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    Hello,

    Here is my very first posting on Piano Society. It's Chopin - Waltz No.20 in F minor (1838). My insperation for learning this song was Robert's recording. I hope I have done this piece justice. If I am accepted, I will post more recodings. Please feel free to provide feedback as I am always open to suggestions.

    Thanks,

    Bita
     
  2. techneut

    techneut Active Member Piano Society Artist

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    I did not know this waltz, despite there being two recordings of it on this site already :oops:
    So I can not offer much detailed feedback. But it sounds very well done to me, nothing to niggle about. A good debut !
     
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    To be honest I wasn't really familiar with this waltz myself, but I must congratulate you on a job very well done. You've done a very good job of progressing the phrase - especially towards the end (just before the coda) you can let the LH sing out even more since you have it well shaped.
    Bravo,
     
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    pianolady Monica Hart, Administrator Staff Member Piano Society Artist

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    Yeah, and one of them is mine. But....it's terrible. I'm going to have to re-do it someday. At the time, I thought the tempo was fine; now I think it is way too slow. Plus, it's riddled with those darn inaudible notes.

    Bitakia - In my very, very, humble (and many times wrong) opinion, I think your tempo here is just a tad fast. Especially at the end where it seemed you were almost rushing it. But overall, you play this nice and musically. I can hear your dynamics and your phrasing is good. There are a couple places that you play differently and it could just be a difference in scores. The first one is at measure 7 - the first LH note, I show a low C-sharp. Another one is at measure 37 - my LH plays A#-G#-A#-C double#-A#-G#. The last thing is at the very last note in LH. I think it should be a low, low F#. It sounds like you played a C# which doesn't really make sense to me. I wonder if my speakers are doing something wierd...Anyway, I hope I haven't offended you. Your version is a lot better than mine.
     
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    Great job, Bita. The tempo seems just right to me.
     
  6. Anonymous

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    Thank you everyone for your kind words and very constructive advise. I really appreciate it. Hope to one day improve on my Chopin. Unfortunatelly I've only been playing for the past year and half after I stoped playing at the age of 9.
    Chopin is very technically demanding and I have a long way to go.

    Thanks again all!

    Bita
     
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    robert New Member Piano Society Artist

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    Very good and also, I agree that the tempo is right. Perhaps a bit accelerated in the end (exactly as my recording and it is very easy to do so here) but please, it should really end in an F-sharp and not a C-sharp (as Monica rightfully points out). Otherwise, very good and if you can correct this mistake and provide a biography, I will put it up.
     
  8. Anonymous

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    Thank you, Robert. You and Monica are absolutely correct about the F-sharp. I will redo this piece and resubmit along with my biography.

    I do have a question though, regarding my biography, do I email it to you or post it on the forum? I Also, I would like to submit other pieces, should I follow the same process and post them on the forum and wait for an acceptance reply?
     
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    You can either post your biography here or send it to info@pianosociety.com (or to me or Chris). Regarding new submissions, we always use the acceptance procedure for each new recording so you post them here in separate topics (unless they form a set).
     

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