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Liszt, Romance Oubliee

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  1. Kazekayou

    Kazekayou Member Piano Society Artist Trusted Member

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    Hi everybody,
    occasionally Mrs. Pianolady plays the same piece
    which is simpl, beautiful, calm,
    while mine is too agogig being negatively influecned by Russian conductor Golovanov.
    Please make a comment!
     
  2. hyenal

    hyenal New Member Piano Society Artist

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    I don't know the piece well cause I heard it for the first time from the pianolady.
    All I can say is I like both of yours, even though the two are so different from each other!
     
  3. Kazekayou

    Kazekayou Member Piano Society Artist Trusted Member

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    Thank you for your generous words but
    I prefer Pianolady's one. Her interpertation is, I am sorry, much more impressive
    while my interpretation might be erabolate but eigenartig, capricioso, I don't know in English
    perhaps, self-indulgente, anyway it lacks unity! I must try to improve it.
     
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    Dear Teppei,

    Thank you for your kind words about my playing of this piece. I give credit to my teacher who instructed me on how to produce the phrasing and tone (to the best of my abilities). Remember, I am only an amateur also, so I still have much to learn.

    If you want to improve your recording of this piece, here are maybe a few suggestions and remarks I have regarding your rendition:

    1. The opening can be a little more legato. And your rhythm is not so cohesive. There is a bit too much slowing and dotted things happening. Also, once or twice I heard a couple notes blurring together.

    2. Bar 13 - RH 2nd E is an E-flat

    3. bar 15 - the first chord is wrong

    4. bar 20 - too much slow down on last 2 LH 8th notes

    5. tempo slowed too much at bar 23

    6. way too much slow down at bat 33

    7. bar 37 wrong chord

    8. Tranquillo part - the phrasing on the bars that have half-notes could be shaped better. You want to taper off on the second half-notes.

    9. bar 53 - wrong LH - should be e-g-c-e

    10. bar 81 - the previous 16th notes now change to 8th notes

    11. RH E should be tied.

    Some of these things could be only matters of interpretation and may also be from using different scores. Hope this helps you!
     
  5. Kazekayou

    Kazekayou Member Piano Society Artist Trusted Member

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    Dear Pinaolady,
    Thanks so much for your warm instruction.
    I will correct what you pointed out.
    It takes time!
    Thanks
    Teppi


    Thank you for your kind words about my playing of this piece. I give credit to my teacher who instructed me on how to produce the phrasing and tone (to the best of my abilities). Remember, I am only an amateur also, so I still have much to learn.

    If you want to improve your recording of this piece, here are maybe a few suggestions and remarks I have regarding your rendition:

    1. The opening can be a little more legato. And your rhythm is not so cohesive. There is a bit too much slowing and dotted things happening. Also, once or twice I heard a couple notes blurring together.

    2. Bar 13 - RH 2nd E is an E-flat

    3. bar 15 - the first chord is wrong

    4. bar 20 - too much slow down on last 2 LH 8th notes

    5. tempo slowed too much at bar 23

    6. way too much slow down at bat 33

    7. bar 37 wrong chord

    8. Tranquillo part - the phrasing on the bars that have half-notes could be shaped better. You want to taper off on the second half-notes.

    9. bar 53 - wrong LH - should be e-g-c-e

    10. bar 81 - the previous 16th notes now change to 8th notes

    11. RH E should be tied.

    Some of these things could be only matters of interpretation and may also be from using different scores. Hope this helps you![/quote]
     

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