Discussion in 'Submission Room' started by PJF, Jan 20, 2007.
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Notable slip in the bass at 2:15; ah well, it happens. Reading error in the repeated bass chord at 3:04 (sorry, I don't have the score or a keyboard handy to be more specific about which note's the culprit). The wiggly figuration after the four-on-three at 4:50 is missing the opening Bb and departs the C too soon for my taste, the result feels "bouncy" and in the wrong style.
These errors are only noticeable because everything else is just right.
Aside from the couple of slips, which you cover up pretty well, the only thing I heard to niggle about is the tempo at 1:37. You slow down quite a bit there - I don't show any markings for this, but maybe I just don't understand the score well enough to know better. I haven't heard it that way before. It's not bad, just different (for me) that's all.
I think you are very good at bringing out the melody line in all sections.
Thanks for the kind words, but I've posted the wrong version! I think I may have accidentally deleted the good one. :x
And emptied your Recycle Bin as well haven't you ?
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