Hi, Hye Jin! congratulations playing this beautiful transcription! you play it pretty much the way I like it! and your mistakes are hardly noticeable. it's very good this way you played, and everything I say doesn't mean you SHOULD do, because... as I said... it's already good! anyway... if I could say something, I only wished a little more sound in some forte passages (these are only few, and maybe the end also). there is also that passage at 2'18 which I wished it was softer. but I know it can be very difficult (I played the much easier Siloti transcription, and I couldn't play any softer... so imagine the Rachmaninov's one!) WOW! Your crescendo at 2'55 is SO BEAUTIFUL! this is one of the most beautiful moments of this transcription, but I never heard it that way! great job, Hye! and cute daughter!