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A third "Moment Musical"

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  1. mgasilva

    mgasilva New Member

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    Hello!

    This is my third attempt at the moment musical (Schubert's in F minor).

    I think the dynamics are a little better, and I tried to use a little rubato, but comparing to the second version I think the sixths you mentioned are a little sloppier.

    I truly enjoy trying to perfect a piece, so do not fret about making any criticisms.

    I will let you chose between this and the second attempt for putting it up on the site.

    Thank you,

    Marcelo

    Schubert - Moment Musical No. 3 in F minor
     
  2. pianolady

    pianolady Monica Hart, Administrator Staff Member Piano Society Artist Trusted Member

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    I’m glad you understand things, Marcelo. We all strive to put up our best recordings, and the few of us members who actually take time out of our own day to listen and critique other members are just trying to help the pianist accomplish that.

    About your third attempt – I do like it better than the second one. I can hear that you added in a slight bit of rubato, and there are no more hesitant spots like in the second version. Dynamics are a little improved here as well. The only thing I wish you had not done was to play the final chord so loud, but that’s not a big deal. I have put this one up on the site.
     
  3. Mark

    Mark New Member Piano Society Artist

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    Agreed Marcelo, this one sounds good:)
     
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    juufa72 New Member Piano Society Artist

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    To my ears this sounds the same as your second attempt.
     

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