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 Post subject: Chanson pour une fin (in Rondo form)
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 8:27 pm 
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Here's one more song I've made recently. The name means "Song for an end" (that's because it'll be used as the last song in a dance presentation). It's in a rondo form and is rather tonal... The actual aim is to be used as Sound Track for a contemporary dance presentation. However, the music ended up quite beautiful (in my opinion). What do you tell me?


After some advices, I've made some changes. So, here's the new version of the music (BTW, the presentation was great!)

Thanks for the help


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 Post subject: Re: Chanson pour une fin (in Rondo form)
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 8:59 pm 
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Christian,
I like this one. However, IMO, it's form is not yet balanced. The 4th section ABAC (which starts at 1'10") is too short. I think you should lengthen it. Then the final section should also be made longer. Simply put, the final two sections are too short for the ABA that came before (the whole piece is only 1'38"). Also, given the tempo and almost moto perpetuo style of it, you should take more time to end the piece, with maybe a nice coda or something to help bring it to a close with more substance.

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 Post subject: Re: Chanson pour une fin (in Rondo form)
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 9:23 pm 
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Thanks, Eddy. Yes, I guess you're right. I should make these parts longer.. ok, I'm gonna work on it.

Thanks again


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 Post subject: Re: Chanson pour une fin (in Rondo form)
PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2011 6:49 pm 
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I have made some changes in the music. Please, check the first post of this topic.

Christian


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 Post subject: Re: Chanson pour une fin (in Rondo form)
PostPosted: Thu May 26, 2011 1:19 am 
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Christian,
I think you did a fine job of balancing it out and have definitely improved it! I think you can still think of a different way to end it, however. I don't think is needs faster notes, rather slower (longer) ones: something like 4 pulses (2 bars) of dotted 1/4 notes, followed by 2-3 bars of dotted 1/2 note sonorities. This gives it time to "slow down" and end.

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