Good to see you finally have some time play again, after all the trouble with the site!
Looking forward to a situation without technical problems...pretty bored with them. So yes, more piano playing!
Technically, seems to be shaping up nicely. The playing is rather detached, especially in the beginning, I hope that is just a phase (probably the best way to practice this piece though). I do not hear much of the dynamics (of which there's quite a lot on this piece) and phrasing as yet, and little rubato, could be all this is planned for the next take ? One thing that bothered me is the RH downward run concluding the A section. That is way too fast, there is no indication in the score (at least not mine) that it should be played otherwise than in the normal rhythm. Also the execution of bar 11 of the B section sounds a bit peculiar to me but that could depend on the score.
The playing sounds detached as a result of that I cannot grip many of the left hands figurations and that I do not use the pedal until bar 15-17 and then not until 23. But I am not sure that this is my final decision how to play it.
Also, you are right about the dynamics. I have focused on memorizing and the technique of playing it much more than the musical interpretation. You can be certain that I will re-record it later on.
The RH downward is way too fast when I compared it to other interpretations. It fits the hand very well (A-flat major scales with skips of the G key) so I kind of just through it off.
I'll check bar 11 of the B-part when I get back to the piano.