I don't think it's too long as it is, but if you'd like it shortened some more, I can use my English whiz skills to make it shorter without actually changing anything you said. Also, you should put spaces between the parentheses and the words that come before and after them (unless it's punctuation after - then no space). Like so. It looks kind of sloppy otherwise.
I would love to see what you can come up with
But to be honest,i wasnt really talking about the bio.I was more referring to the full site.Maybe combine a few pages?