A short piano piece

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A short piano piece

Postby cytong » Tue Jun 24, 2008 11:38 pm

I wrote this piano piece last year, a more sober one ....

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Postby juufa72 » Wed Jun 25, 2008 1:19 am

I hear a hybrid between Bach's WTC Prelude C-minor (BWV 847) and Chopin's Etude 25/10

Anyways, your composition kept my attention. It's well done. Thank you for sharing.
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Postby techneut » Sat Jul 05, 2008 5:28 pm

I seem to have missed this post. A very nice and mellifluous piece, although I have to say that it does go on a bit, with little attempt at variation - the turn to minor key does not really help dispel that impression. In my opinion, the piece should either be shorter, or prived some contrast either thematically or rhythmically.

I do not like the way it is recorded, with these very swimmy acoustics. Is this a MIDI recording or are you playing it yourself ?
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Postby cytong » Sat Jul 05, 2008 11:57 pm

Chris, yes, its a play back from FINALE software, which I used to write all my music. If you want to look at the score, I am more than happy email it to you. (I just post a shorter piece ....)

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