Where do I start?
This is quite possibly the most histrionic performance I've ever heard.
The one good thing about your playing is your delicacy of touch. It sounds as though you managed to play pppp. Now all you must do is keep the delicate touch while playing full tempo.
The bad things are the over pedalled first part, the arbitrarily variable tempo and the harsh sound in the bass in the first part. You must play this piece with metronomic eveness, and at full tempo, please! (except where rubato is appropriate.)
To be blunt, I didn't like your alterations. You played an abstraction of the prelude. If you want to play in an abstract style, that's fine. However, it would be far better to post a conventional recording first. A pure concept of the music is prerequisite to artistic performance. Accuracy begets art, this is an inescapable truth.
Please even it out. If you choose not to, that's your prerogative.
P.S. I've played crazy abstractions, too (in error), so I understand your bizzare rendition.